okay, i've had a few stories in my mind for some one shots, and i've just recently committed them to paper (or computer in this case, lol) and i would like your opinion. my main character doesn't have a name (yet) but i hope you enjoy her trials and tribulations with love :)
i tried to do this in original manga format (reading right to left) constructive criticsm always welcome :) the 'title page' is up next!