i think ima join up at that website ^^ thx for giving the link to ur story, it introduced me to a new site where i can post my stories ^^

i enjoyed reading that! ^^ i enjoyed the way you wrote it, and the way you used the normal things in life, like sea and mountains, as symbols for things in humanity. good job mate ^^

cant wait for more

Thanks guys for the comments! =)

I like the moral of you're story and the way you presented it!
Very original, I liked it!