@The Mask:

Thank you so much! ; u ;
Yes, I do realize there is a VERY big absence of punctuation here, now! I don't know what I was thinking. I'm the biggest grammar Nazi I know, so it seems strange that I didn't put in the punctuation. Ahh, well.
I'm glad you enjoyed it and could sing along, mostly. The one part at the beginning, when you sing, "everything new is so ... lame ...!" has a bit of a pause between "so" and "lame." Other than that, I think everything else has the right amount of syllables. Haha xD
I did originally plan to sing this and put a parody of it on Youtube, but my voice sucks. I know, for parodies, people aren't as picky about it. But I'm self-concious. OTL
Anyway, thank you again! It was a very pleasant surprise!

I apologize for the very long delay in deciding the challenge. Here are my comments:

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING: There seems to be an absence of punctuations here, but I think adding them would've been hard since the song seems to be dominated by phrases. I would prefer that the sentences be punctuated in order to indicate them as such. As for spelling, I don't see any errors.

COMPLIANCE WITH INSTRUCTIONS: You've managed to comply with the instructions, so good job on that.

ORIGINALITY: Some lyrics were indeed adapted from the original lyrics of the song, but in general you've managed to present very original lyrics in this piece. Great job!

CLARITY OF INTENDED MESSAGE: I can clearly see that this is more of a complaint of the Pokemon franchise. I can see that you do have a legitimate complaint, yet with this song parody you managed to express your complaint in a very lively way. Terrific job!

SMOOTH FLOW OF THE TUNE WITH THE LYRICS: It appears that the lyrics had a good timing with the tune of the song. I even managed to sing along with well, with considerable success. Good work!

OVERALL: Your song parody had very original lyrics and had a message that was presented in a very amusing manner. The timing of the tune was really good, and I think that people would really enjoy singing to this song of yours.

Because of that, I finally declare you as the winner of the 2010 Anime Song Parody Challenge.

I'm sorry for taking me more than a year to give you this award. But I hope you enjoy your medal. And expect a little theOtaku gift from me soon.

Thanks for participating!

@SaxGirl:

Thank you xD Yeah, those pokemon people are crazy xD

Oh this is greatXD
I can so relate to this:P I stopped watching Pokemon after they went crazy on all the new ones._. It was more than enough when there were 'only' 150XD LOL Nice job and good luck in the challenge, my fellow competitor^^

~S.G~

Oh you think so, do you?

@Mocha chan:

NUUUUU D:< LIES.

No you can't. You just broke the chain now. I WIN! >8D

@Mocha chan:

:/ I could too.

DO NOT! D8< I can keep this up forever you know.

@Mocha chan:

I do!!! D8<

YOU DO NOT SUCK!!

@Hulaberry32:

Thanks a lot xD

@Mocha chan:

:0 Thank you Meghan! *hugs*
I can actually sing this with my Rockband microphone on the computer. The thing is... I suck at singing xD

Nice one! I love it! It makes me really wish I had a recording studio, haha!
And people wonder why I never watch Pokemon anymore... Good job! Good luck!

ROFL that's hilarious! Good luck in the challenge!

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:0 Thank you!
Why 12 though? xD

@Lunar Oblivion:

Thank you Lunari C:

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Thank you 8D

-chuckles- Oh my goodness Miss Chi that's wonderful! So funny.