That was pretty good. I gotta ask, who do you agree with concerning religion, Zack or Mello? I'm a Christian but I understand where Mello was coming from, it's hard to believe there is a kind and loving God when you're in a lot of suffering.

thats is so sad
this might sound ridicules but i was tearing up
i felt mellos pain and the little happiness he had
you mad this story so heart breaking
i love it,please keep up the good work
and everytime u make a story please tell me right away so i can read it

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hm. I think I've see that world already when you put it in the death note section.

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XD Before Mat appeared I wanted to make Zack Mello's best friend but then when I saw Mat I changed the stroyline a bit.XD I've had this story for a long time hah.

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;P Zack was an OC of mine I made a long time ago and kinda wanted to put him in lol.

OOH...I sooo love this story... Must admit it...It truly touched my soul...

Good story!!! I remember getting a rosary for my birthday. It's red.I like orange better now.(no I'm not catholic I'm a christian, I just got one from my grandpa who is catholic...I think.)

must...not...cry....;__; if I could, 10/10 -cries in corner-

That was awsome! I think you should have made it so that the one about Matt was the continuation. That would have been cool, but it was still good.

Very good! I love your fanfics. Only thing that bugged was the lack of commas and question marks, but thats just me. Heh ^^
Really liked it though!!

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Thanks ^^ it took me longer to write than I had anticipated but I'm glad it came out good in the end

I like the story. It has a lot of description and I love the detail. Mello's story is really great. I like it the most.

~Deidara, un