That was a very impressive story about Shino! Also I believe that could have actually happen in the anime if they did a backstory for Shino! Kiba was very in character too!
Very good work! I love your imagination and creativity :3 Shino also sounds a bit more active and talks more when he was young, that's good because it also shows some later development :P
Great work, very well written!
As a die-hard Shino fan, I absolutely love this! It made me cry, without a doubt. Definitely shows the power of just a single word. ^__^ I'd love to see you write more!
ManaTatsumiya
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/23/09 | Reply
Poor Shino. I'm gonna think of this next time I see him and his glasses!
KeikoHatake
Otakuite | Posted 03/02/09 | Reply
I hate being a barrar of bad news, but i went on deviantart.com and this is the same exact story. tsk tsk. that's Plagiarism.
XxRukiaXRocksxX
Otakuite++ | Posted 07/17/08 | Reply
@gaaragirl911:
LOLZ! thanx! =^.^=
gaaragirl911
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/16/08 | Reply
@XxRukiaXRocksxX:
Well, Happy 5 month Anniversary?! ^_^"
Surprise me ;]
XxRukiaXRocksxX
Otakuite++ | Posted 07/16/08 | Reply
lol awesome shino story!!! i just LOVE SHINO!!!!! lol me and him have been married for like 5months already!! LOL LOL XD XD!!
gaaragirl911
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/02/08 | Reply
@wolf angel1:
omg, I could try to do Sasori...I would have to learn more about him though (not one of my favorite characters) But yeah I'll try!
I'm actually working on a Naruto Xmas story right now...so I will try!
Surprise me ;]
akiouchiha
Otakuite | Posted 05/29/08 | Reply
♥Thats so cool♥
wolf angel1
Otakuite++ | Posted 05/22/08 | Reply
hey that is so cool i was crying when i found out he my # 1 fave charater ey could u maybe do 1 on sasori i
him 2 pm me te answer tanks!!
Brit-Brat Wolf
Grand Otaku | Posted 04/27/08 | Reply
awh, it almost made me cry! (and thats saying something!) but i like it alot!
sasuke0323
Grand Otaku | Posted 04/17/08 | Reply
ow...poor shino...
really believable, though!
great story!
Mercury Dragon
Otaku Legend | Posted 04/02/08 | Reply
Aww, it's so sad!! I like it. It was interesting to find out why Shino wears sunglasses.
MechaTamago
Otakuite | Posted 04/02/08 | Reply
That was a very impressive story about Shino! Also I believe that could have actually happen in the anime if they did a backstory for Shino! Kiba was very in character too!
WielderOfTheGong
Otakuite+ | Posted 04/01/08 | Reply
Wow...I don't even particularly think anything of Shinu and this nearly made me cry...sooooo painful....
gaaragirl911
Otaku Eternal | Posted 03/30/08 | Reply
Hehe...You guys (and girls) are awesome! Thanks for the comments!
Surprise me ;]
just.me
DragonGirl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/30/08 | Reply
Very good work! I love your imagination and creativity :3 Shino also sounds a bit more active and talks more when he was young, that's good because it also shows some later development :P
Great work, very well written!
ShikamaruRocks
Otaku Legend | Posted 03/30/08 | Reply
Nice. Very nice. I'd never considered that Shino might have lost his eyes due to recieving his bugs. Wow. Kiba was adorable, by the way.
I really liked this. Go Shino!
otakualchemist
Senior Otaku | Posted 03/30/08 | Reply
As a die-hard Shino fan, I absolutely love this! It made me cry, without a doubt. Definitely shows the power of just a single word. ^__^ I'd love to see you write more!
-OA