Yes, thank you. I am working on improving, and I tried to make the text easier to read, but with so many colors in the background it was hard to pick one that would stand out.
Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light.
I like the way you use your own fanart, and the quote works well with her expression.
I'm not sure what you did with this though, rather you used textures, brushes, etc, but there's far too much colors covering Miku. The wall is a bit busy. I think it would look a lot better if Miku was more vivid. Whatever it is that you covered her up would look better behind her with maybe only some light textures or something overlaying her.
You chose a good color fore the text, but because of the light color and all of the other colors on this, it's a bit hard to read. Perhaps a darker color would have worked better.
I hope this doesn't seem as rude, but I see you're working at making walls and the best way to improve is to get advice and just keep trying, right? I'm not saying this looks bad because I do like it, and you already have a unique style, but I thought a few pointers would be nice :)
It looks so abstract, but I like it because of it. You throw in many colors and things to make an experiment and you did well for that.
Of course there is always room for improvement, but if you keep following your abstract style you might actually come to the way to make some amazing art.
Thank you also for dedicating it to me, it was a nice surprise. :)
I like the sketchy strawberry feel. I think to improve perhaps you could make the text a colour that contrasts with the background a little more, just so it is easier to read ^^
Sarasface
Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/01/12 | Reply
@Morbid Dollie:
Yes, thank you. I am working on improving, and I tried to make the text easier to read, but with so many colors in the background it was hard to pick one that would stand out.
Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light.
Morbid Dollie
Strawberry (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/31/12 | Reply
I like the way you use your own fanart, and the quote works well with her expression.
I'm not sure what you did with this though, rather you used textures, brushes, etc, but there's far too much colors covering Miku. The wall is a bit busy. I think it would look a lot better if Miku was more vivid. Whatever it is that you covered her up would look better behind her with maybe only some light textures or something overlaying her.
You chose a good color fore the text, but because of the light color and all of the other colors on this, it's a bit hard to read. Perhaps a darker color would have worked better.
I hope this doesn't seem as rude, but I see you're working at making walls and the best way to improve is to get advice and just keep trying, right? I'm not saying this looks bad because I do like it, and you already have a unique style, but I thought a few pointers would be nice :)
-those with the biggest hearts hurt the most
Sarasface
Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/31/12 | Reply
@LightFykki:
Thanks. I do hope that I improve with practice. And you're welcome! I dedicated it to you because you're so nice to everyone on theO!
Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light.
Sarasface
Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/31/12 | Reply
@Kaerlyn:
Thank you! Yes, I realized after I submitted it that the text would be a little hard to read...oops.
Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light.
LightFykki
Drachen Herz (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/31/12 | Reply
It looks so abstract, but I like it because of it. You throw in many colors and things to make an experiment and you did well for that.
Of course there is always room for improvement, but if you keep following your abstract style you might actually come to the way to make some amazing art.
Thank you also for dedicating it to me, it was a nice surprise. :)
Kaerlyn
Tea pixie (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/31/12 | Reply
Ooh new wallpapers?
I like the sketchy strawberry feel. I think to improve perhaps you could make the text a colour that contrasts with the background a little more, just so it is easier to read ^^
Have fun experimenting ^^