here's a preview of a story i'm working on. it's actually the prologue and i'm still working on it. should i leave it the way it is or add more. what do you think?

It was a cold and wet night. A car pulls up to the Red Rose mental hospital. It was a a big white building with lots of windows which were barred. A man wearing a red duster coat, with the sleeves rolled up to his elbows, steps out of the car as a doctor and two nurses come out to greet their guest. The man opens the passenger door and lifts a little girl with long jet black hair and red eyes, who looked no older than six, out of the car and into his arms. She was wrapped in a blanket and looked like she was in a shock-like state, her eye distant. The man walked up the steps and stood in front of the doctor., who greeted him with a nod. One of the nurses stepped forward to take the girl. The little girl leaning more into the man, who held her close to him.

“She’ll only let me carry her. She’s been through a lot tonight.” said the man.
“We understand. It’s not easy for a child her age to lose both parents." said the doctor. " Especially since she witnessed their death.”