In one hour

I decided to dedicate one hour today to the first concrete thought that came to mind. I fleshed it out and it evolved into something completely different. I haven't done a short story like this before. It will have mistakes (I have not proof read, this is truly just an hours work), but I hope it has heart. And no guns? I was expecting guns when I started..

Maybe there is humour here? Mirth? I'm not certain. It's certainly different.