Kaló̀±s í̀±rthate ston kósmo mou!
(Welcome to my World)
Ok, this is the first world I'm making about random stuff and myself, so, I hope you like it!
So, a little bit about me...
Name: can't say, but call me Oka
Sex: female
Age: 13
Hair color/style: Brown/medium long and wavy
Eye color: brown
Height: 5ft. 2-3in.
Hope you enjoy my world!
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This is Carlos
OMG I WON I WON I WON I WON I WON!!!!!!
I AM NOW THE 4TH BEST 7TH GRADE WRITER IN THE STATE OF OHIO!!!!!!!!!!!1
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*EXPLODES FROM HAPPINESS*
I am entered in a State-wide poetry contest. I wish to get feedback about my poem, so I'm posting it ^^
Dreaming
Sitting at a cold desk,
Vandalized light tan with a blue chair,
The dull roaring of the AC,
I feel trapped,
No way to adventure.
Isolated.
But one day I’ll go.
Lungs bursting on stage,
Or fingers smacking strings.
Helping wings spread to fly,
Or planting seeds in young minds.
Free.
But how?
My parents are not rich,
Nor could I risk
Straying from home.
My parents couldn’t let me,
My colleagues would down me,
Crushing my dreams,
Bringing me despair,
And tying my wings together,
So I cannot fly.
Impossible.
And yet some still cheer me on,
Letting me venture out to sea.
But they tether my boat to shore,
In case a storm blows by.
To let me live my dreams
If only for a moment.
Possibilities.
I pull back my mind,
Staring at my notebook,
Smirking,
Knowing one day,
It’ll be me.
The one who goes farther,
The next Rosa Parks,
The one who paints the Mona Lisa,
The new voice on the radio.
Finally.
And who would imagine
That girl, one day,
Sitting at a desk,
Vandalized light tan with a blue chair,
The dull roaring of the AC,
Feeling trapped,
With no way to adventure.
Ok, I'm sorry, but my new favorite song is the geico theme:
