Writting Mission

I'm kida bored so I'll try out the writing mission! Hope I get this right... Okay, how does this sound:

There once was a world, not unlike this one, that in it had people called half-breeds. Known with hatred and disgust by a majority of the human race they were a cross between an animal and a human, forever outcasts to both. Known as halfers they searched for a place to fit in but the only thing they had was each other and a rumor of a place called Harmony. I was said to be a place only half-breeds could live, the only safe haven. Desperate for a place to call home, countless halfers searched for it and were never to be heard of again...

Here's the world where you create your own halfbreed (or two or maybe even three) and set off with a group of halfers in a quest for the place called Harmony. Drama and action, that's what this trip's about so don't be afraid to put in a few twists into the mix. Earn points for each post and mission and climb up the rankings and make requests.

Be sure to post and have fun!

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I feel like I'm missing a few things here and there and I don't mind if you don't like it. If you do put it in though, feel free to change it all you like.

For rankings I don't really have anything decent but I think a good beginner ranking could be called Halfling and the best you can get Beast (cause you have to be a beast to get it *shot)

Please comment!

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