Video Critique Example

This is an example of a post asking for a critique. Anything in italics (aka, the instructions) does not need to be in your post. Please state in your title the type of video you would like to receive critique for (AMV, GMV, MMV, short film, etc). Then, please embed the video below, and write any important basic information, including the program used (the program is especially important, because it will affect the advice given through the critique since each editing program is different! Everything else, if applicable, is just curiosity) You may also include any other information you wish. To those providing the critique, you may leave your critique in the comments here or wherever the video is hosted (It's up to the discretion of the poster, though.) Remember, be encouraging and provide positive, constructive critiques.

"MMV: Loves Me Not"

Music: "Relapse Collapse" - In Fear and Faith
Fandom: Ib
Program: Sony Vegas 7

This video is a year and a half old, but I still consider it one of my best! My editing style hasn't changed much since this was created, so any critique is still valid and helpful.

This video actually began as an animation test. Most of the animations seen in the video were done before I had even picked a song. The theme of the video mostly revolves around the bad endings of Ib (which is a fabulous game that everyone should play-), and I used fanart to create it, since it's pretty hard to make a video with a pixel game. I spent somewhere between 10-20 hours creating this, and I think my hard work paid off, as the video has been pretty well received on YouTube and tumblr. But, I know it's still not perfect, so any suggestions are welcome so that I can avoid similar problems in future videos like this!

Thanks!

~KeybladeMewKasa

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