[WIP]Art Critique Request

This is for CCC's Contest about designing a fantasy mascot! HERE~

She's going to be holding a pen but it is currently invisible since I hid the sketch layer XD XD

I know there are some anatomy issues - So I'm particularly interested in those/clothes issues/how to make faces not ugly :)

Thank you all so much!

OH! I use Photoshop Elements (so no pen tool :( )

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