This would be my American cartoon drawing style. I was in a rush with this; that's why it's not anime/manga-ish. The art style is inspired by Touch Detective and Phineas and Ferb. I'm still figuring out how I want my American cartoon drawing style to be. Besides drawing an American cartoon style for the first time, it's my 1st time doing action like in page 2 and doing backgrounds.
This is all traditional BTW which made things harder.
Critiques, not art wise?