here are a few of my poems please comment on them
love i thought i knew but it was false as it always is
clawing my eyes out to know why i know so many people yet i am so alone
love creates a warmth and still my heart is ice
it will never thaw for i am alone forever ice cold
even more............
We enjoy warmth because we have been cold. We appreciate light because we have been in darkness. By the same token, we can experience joy because we have known sadness.
you know.............
i love you but loving you hurts
unhealable wound unfixeble broken heart
you dont help you make it worse i cry for help but no one listens
they never will i'll sew my broken heart with the needle of a compass
i'll heal my wounds with the piasn of others
but i'll always love you even it hurts too
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Sometimes the pain's too strong to bare...and life gets so hard you just don't care. You feel so alone you just sit and cry...every second you wish you could die. Then you start thinking who would care...if one day thI could go on with my day and act like everything is okay. But as my life goes on it hurts more in every way.
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It’s quite ironic that in life, the person that brings out the best in you and the one that makes you strong is actually your weakness..
i know they arent very good but please comment on them and give me advice to make them better.............
he is whatchiong whatch what you say or shall he damn me to pian 
~f@llen
