World's name: NaruMaruto life as u know
Creator: narutoKHfighter
Date created: 04/11/08
Typre/ category: Blog/ Personal
Members/ guest posters: N/A
Description: This is the main blog for the offline Life of Narutokhfighter
Personally, I really like this world. narutoKHfighter posts in this world are really fun. She posts simple stuff about what's going on in her life but the way she writes it that make them very interesting to read (her style is very cute xD).
If u like reading this kind of stuff, I think u shouldnt miss this world. Check out what's up (or even down) in her life and do share what u think by leaving a comment.
As for the world design, I say Hetalia really fits the overall theme of this world. Background, fonts, color and everything is easy on the eyes.
This world is frequently updated and there are even some fun posts like the survey thingy (u know where there's questions and u answer them.. and others can copy the questions and write their own answers and post them..?)
Well, overall, it is a simple yet fun world. Check it people!!
click HERE to visit
World's name: Community Fusion!
Creator: littlepooch
Date created: 06/03/09
Type/category: RP / Personal
Members /guest poster so far: 17
Description (as by the creator): Here's the world where you create your own halfbreed (or two or maybe even three, may be foure if you really want!) and set off with a group of halfers in a quest for the place called Harmony. Drama, action, and romance, that's what this trip's about so don't be afraid to put in a few twists into the mix. Earn points for each post and mission and climb up the rankings and make requests.
Review by Support KIRA:
Presentation: I have to say this right now. Poochy knows how to put together a world. The background image may not be so uniformal(might just be my computer screen), BUT it does go with the world themes and isn’t distracting at all. The part I am completely floored with is the terrific introduction. This holds EVERYTHING I look for in a world. Especially in an RP like this. There’s a nice image, following there is a summary of the story, Links to not just the members but their character profiles! Missions/events/points, AND she’s even included a link to a summary, the rules and generally important info for anyone who would like to join, no matter HOW LATE.
Content: Now, I will be completely honest. I did not have time to read the posts, but I can see that there is regular participation, which is one of the most important things in a RP. Poochy encourages participation by giving points for the members, and even coming up with missions, or other little ways in which to earn points, such as, drawing your characters, or getting others to join in. It appears to have quite a few members, which only makes things more fun!
Overall Opinion: I encourage anyone interested with the storyline to jump in and have fun. It seems like a really good world to RP, and with Poochy keeping up with weekly reports and points, it gives needed motivation to keep it going. Great Job. I might join if I get some more free time. LOL
Rating: 4.7 Really good…because it’s pretty hard to impress someone as strict as me. XD
Review by aoi:
Community Fusion is a great place to let your imagination runs wild (in an acceptable ways of course,lol). it's a fun place to join if u are into this rp-ing thing. with a unique storyline (the OCs are a mix of human and animal), quite a bunch of members, this world is certainly a great place to have your Oc around. 4.8 stars!
Overall stars: 4.8 out of 5 (excellent!)
What we say: RP lovers, this world is the place for u to hangout!
Link to the world: click HERE
World's name: AM I A HEARTLESS
Creator: jctmanofsteel
Date created: 10/29/09
Type/category: Life / Kingdom Hearts
Members /guest poster so far: n/a
Description (as by the creator): "can you brek a heartless heart"?
Review by Support KIRA:
Presentation: Alright, I ALWAYS start with the presentation and design of a world. From what I can see, the background picture seems to suit the title and is fairly uniform to the color of the world design and text. I approve. Everything is easily seen and read, that’s great. There is no introduction. You may want to include something about what they world is for, or about, but from the posts, I can tell it’s just basically a place for uh…poems about life? Poems isn’t really the right word though, the posts remind me of the type of things you see after hours in coffee shops, the stand up type of real life material you see. ^^ So, you probably have no need for an intro, but it might look nice to include one anyway just so visitors know WHAT they are getting into. : )
Content: As I stated, it’s a world with sadder-themed works like poetry. I’m not sure if you are aiming for it to be a long one lined rant, but there is no punctuation, and some spelling errors. It’s not illegible or anything, that’s why I’m not sure if it’s supposed to be this way. ^^;
Overall Opinion: It’s interesting to check out the posts and read Jct’s opinions of the world. Not everything is happy, and since I can be a pretty gothic-theme loving person myself, I actually really like some of it. ^^ It’s refreshing to see things from the dark side, as I like to say. XD You should check it out if you’re into stand up poetry corner, or just seeing things from a different perspective.
Rating: I’ll give it a 3.8. My suggestion is to be a bit more active, or even invite some other posters who share your feelings and would like to write this way too. It may bring people together to where you can all share your outlook on life. ^^
Review by ShingetsuHime:
I think it’s very good. I love the entries it contains. They really speak to me since I can really relate. For improvement recommendations…maybe add some punctuation. All of your posts are all one big run-on. Another is maybe proof read. I found a lot of mistakes going over them but they were easily fixable, like a single missed letter in simple words that your finger didn’t press, we all make them. I would definitely suggest people read this. Everything is really well written and all have meaning. My rating: 4.7! Awesome job!
Review by beloved blood:
The bg goes well with teh title of the world, o' course. Very deep emotional ... explanations? The only thing I think the world needs is more punctuation, for the sake of grammar. Just where the sentences end and begins- it's kind of confusing. Oh, perhaps some pictures- *o* I am one for visual!
4 stars!
Overall stars: 4.2 out of 5 (excellent!)
What we say: unique posts, very interesting indeed! go check it out!
Link to the world: click HERE
World's name: AJISOSM (A journey in search of something more)
Creator: clueless101
Date created: 2/23/09
Type/category: Action/Adventure/humor/romance, Inuyasha
Members /guest poster so far: n/a
Description (as by the creator): Hikari Tama the protagonist of the story has to make her way threw the feudal era to find her father and older brother. But is there a bigger plot to this story then meets the eye?
(First made for fanfiction.net)
Here's the opening I use for fanfiction.
These Wounds are like the ocean’s depths These crimson sins, Become colorless with death" She whispered as the pouring rain beat down on her face.
Review by littlepooch:
Clueless world is a Inuyasha fiction with some of her OCs. Its a really good fiction so far even though I'm still only at chapter 4 out of the 18 chapters! Wow that should keep someone busy if you LOVE Inuyasha and bored. Something I would recommend Clueless is to put whos prospective its in if you change it. Hem..But then again I don't know if thats a problem since I'm not that far! A Journey in Search of Something More is wonderful so far and even if you don't know Inuyasha I think you could get the gist of it ;3
I give this world 4 stars ^^
Review by belved blood:
I didn't read all of the story, as I'm low on meh time gauge, but I think there should be a different bg. Maybe Inuyasha and Kagome. But, I only read up to the 3rd chapter, so, maybe Sesshy-sama appears later. Nice intro, the story has ample dialouge, but not enough detail of the setting. It just needs more detail. Ahem *doesn't mean to sound pervy* I like Hikari! She's cute! And Zen, so shy! Type on!
4 stars!
Review by aoi:
2 words - simply amazing!
a great fanfiction, even tho im not really a fan of Inuyasha, clueless101 work did caught my attention. a great read for those who love the series and the good new is, it is updated frequently. so u dont have to wait long to know what happen. 4.5 stars!
Overall stars: 4.2 out of 5 (excellent!)
What we say: go read it and dont forget to leave your comment to show your support!
Link to the world: click HERE
World's name: Babygurl's Mind
Creator: babygurl24
Date created: 10/02/09
Type/category: Personal
Members /guest poster so far: 5
Description (as by the creator): This is the first world that I created so it may be a little rocky. But it is basically a place to update people on everything.
Review by beloved blood:
Babygurl's Mind [world XD] is more like a blog, telling of everyday life. I would recommend this to anyone who wants to read up on people (and not in a stalker way O.o), like a blog. It's always fun to read about funny and weird things that happen everyday! Also, the design is nice, cute bg. You can read the words. There are posts regularly!!! I give this world, a big 4.5 out of 5!!! I think there should be more pictures or videos or something.
Review by Support KIRA:
Alright, First I’m going to start with the design, since usually that is the first thing to draw people in. The background picture is cute, though a bit repetitive due to it’s size, it’s just a little small. I would suggest finding something with a more uniform look. Try sites that offer seamless background pix. Those are amazing, and they have awesome designs. Here’s a link to one: http://www.fatstrawberry.com/ .This place is GREAT. I really recommend it. ;)
Next, the introduction. Well, the lack of one. ^^; Even if it is just a blog page, wouldn’t it be nice to give your visitors a peek of what you’re about to offer them? You can put anything you like. A Nice Picture, some info about yourself, or a brief explanation of just what kind of world they’ve entered. Any or all of these things would suffice, and I really think it would be a nice addition.
Now for the content. This is a blog about Babygurl’s current life events. I’m guessing it’s a bit like a journal. What I would suggest is to add other things as well, instead of just blogs. Like, maybe you found a really cool picture online? Or a video, or song? Share what you like with your viewers, after all, you want them to know a bit about YOU right? ^^ Shake it up a bit and keep them guessing.
I’m going to rate this 3 stars only because it seems that it’s only in it’s start, being updated once every week. A few renovations would definitely help. Good Luck!! ^^
Review by aoi:
Babygurl's Mind, as the name stated is a blog-like world where babygurl posts updates on her personal stuff. Regurlarly updated, people can get to know more about her and all sorts of random stuff. Not to miss one function that this world serves, is it also a place for her friends/ guest posters to post updates on whatever topic they like. so, if u are interested, i suggest u pm her or leave her a comment and maybe u can post your stuff to make this world livelier. and also dont forget to comment on her posts as your comments really matters. do check this world out if u like to read blog-like stuff. 4.2 stars for the fun posts.
Overall stars: 3.9 out of 5 (great!)
What we say: for those who love to read on updates of people, visit this world!
Link to the world: click HERE
