World's name: In Between
Creator: babygurl24
Date created: 23/10/09
Type/category: Personal
Members /guest poster so far: N/A
Description (as by the creator): It's a world dedicated to a book I am writing. Kind of like episodes (Part 1, Part 2 etc.) or maybe even a writing column.
Review by greenLeAf863:
>babygurl24's world, In Between is one heck of a world! The storyline of In Between is an addictive realistic fiction that I would recommend for mostly teenage girls between grades 6 to high school, but who am I to tell you what you want to read? Everyone should check out this world and its fantastic story created by none other than theOtaku's very own babygurl24 ! Her story contains twists that you won't expect and her characters are so colorful and unique that you can picture them as a real person.
There are 2 chapters up on her world so far but I have a feeling she will add much more. In her posts, there are a few spelling mistakes but who doesn't make spelign mistakes (lolz)! XD One recommendation would be to choose a cool theme and decorate the background of her world with pictures or colors to attract more readers. I would also recommend that babygurl24 make each chapter in her Table of Contents a link to each individual posts, so that way when she adds more posts, her readers may go to a specific chapter. My last suggestion is too include the Summary or a link to the summary in the introduction to her world.
This world deserves a 4 out of 5 stars^___^ Everyone should check out this world or miss out on a great world.
Review by ShingetsuHime:
>In between by babygurl24 , is an excellent read. I couldn’t stop! It has a good plot line complete with amazing description from the very start. I don’t see anything wrong with it other than there being not enough posts! I cant wait to read more. My recommendation to others? Read it. My rating? 4.5. good job!
Review by aoi:
>For those who love teenage life fiction. this is the one for you. The story line is great and will keep you intact. An inspiring writer indeed, babygurl24 managed to pull the readers into the story with great plot and a good writing style. But every writer need feedback in order to improve the work. So I suggest for those of you who are interested, do visit this world, read her work and dont forget to leave your constructive comments there. 4 stars here!
Overall stars: 4.2 out of 5 (excellent!)
What we say: Do visit this world and enjoy a great read!
Link to the world: click HERE
