World's name: Savior
Creator: saekimidori
Date created: 26/07/09
Type/category: Original fiction /original anime and manga
Members /guest poster so far: N/A
Description (as by the creator): In a modern, under control city, teenagers reside peacefully... Until a crisis hits their homeland, and everyone is required to fight...
Review by aoi:
A great fiction! Saekimidori's writing style that contains mostly of dialogues/ conversations enable the readers to actually visualize the scene. Besides a good story line, one of the most interesting feature of this world is the link to the original site of Savior. If you happen to read the story, don't forget to check out the original site as it contains lots more info of Savior. Nice artworks also available there. Also one more interesting feature is the usage of spoiler text in the story to differentiate certain scenes.
So if you are a fan of teenage fiction/fantasy, you really should check out Savior. Really worth it. 4.5 stars!
Review by beloved blood:
The background works well, and you can read the words. I really like the bg, btw, it's cute. Very nice touch to put the picture with the descripton of the story and the site url on it, as well as some official artwork!!! I think the overall world design is very cute. The story is okay. I think there should be a more... er, 'clarification' of the movements of the characters and more details about the main characters like Miyuki and Ciel (cute names, btw). What I mean by 'clarification of the movements' are, for example: 'The girl gave no response. The man walked towards his desk and grabbed a textbook. The few students in the room stared with wide eyes. Suddenly, a loud bang was heard. The girl at the back of the room shot up from her chair and looked around the room.' I was a little confused when I read that part, because you didn't say where the bang came from.
I would recommend this story to any one who likes shoujo, really! Or, if you like fantasy. I shall read the rest! I give you, a 4.8 out of 5!
Overall stars: 4.7 out of 5 (excellent!)
What we say: fiction/fantasy fans, read this one. it's a must!
Link to the world: click HERE
