Who

This is a story I'm currently making. Well here it is:

Chapter 1

“Who’s the new guy?” My girlfriend Melissa asks. I look over and the person that everyone seems to want to know. He has raven black shoulder-length hair and wearing black paints and a long-sleeved black shirt. I scoff. This is the person everyone wants to know. “Just looks like some emo guy.” I reply then go back to eating my lunch. “No seriously he looks…mysterious.” My other girlfriend, Kayla, chirps in. “Come on he’s not that special.” I say. I take a closer look at him. “He has such a pale face and those rings under his eyes are so black.” I wonder. “Whatever. We’ll find out when we’re in class.” Melissa says. We finish our food then head outside. We go to the apple tree were we usually sit. I stop in my tracks. There is the new boy. Sitting under our apple tree. “Why is he there?” I ask, a little hysteria creeping into my voice. The girls shrug then head over. How can they take this so carelessly? We’ve been sitting under that apple tree since junior high!!! I hesitate then quickly catch up with them. “Hi.” I greet him when the other girls unable to. He looks up at me wearily. “Um…me and my friends usually sit here so if you could just move…?” I ask. He sighs then slowly gets up. I notice something. He’s not wearing shoes. And then just before he leaves he adds “My names Colin.” Then walks away. “Did you see that? He wasn’t wearing shoes!” Kayla says. “Just like I said some weird emo dude.” I brush him off then we talk about what dresses we’re getting for prom. “No biggie.” I think. “Just some weird kid.”

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