Harry Potter Roleplay Character

First Name: Jessah Layne (J.L.)
Last Name:Finnigan
Heritage:Mother is a Pure-blood, Father is a Half.
Place of Birth:She was born in Ireland but has been living in the U.S. When her father died, she and her mother moved back to Ireland
Year: First year

Looks:

Eyes:a firece Blueish-Gray
Hair: Short layered brown hair
General Apperance: She is average, about 5'3. She doesnt see her self as pretty, but most of the other students do.
Dressing Style: When not in her school robes, she usually wear a skirt (preferably plaid) and a white dress shirt

General Character Traits:

Strengths: She is deticated, adventurous, and intellegent. She is very gifted at Transfiguration, more so than the usual first year. (Her mother is an Animagus, and some say that she is too, but if so, she doesnt show it)
Weaknesses: She is stuborn, and doesnt know when to quit. She also can not ressist the chance to prove anyone wrong.
Personality: She is quiet when not around her professers, she is usually in the common room writing spells of doing work for her Professors. In classes she is bubbly, and energetic.

Family Details

Personal History: She was born on the 29th of June. she is the youngest of 3 children. She has elder twin siblings, Victoire and Aaden. She was born in Naas, Ireland, at age 1 she moved to the US. Her father had gotten a job in California. She had lived in America until her 6th birthday. About a week before her 6th birthday her mother had gotten a letter for the Ministry saying that her father had died. the day of her birthday the flew back to Ireland.

Parents: Gabrel Finnigan (mother), and Rentrix Finnigan
Siblings:Twins, Aaden and Victoire Finnigan

Strong Area of Magic: Transfiguration and Potions
Weak Area of Magic:Charms and DADA

Minor Details:

Pets: a Calico white and gray owl, Jenviore
Wand:11 and a 1/2, mahogany and pheonix feather
Favorite Quidditch position: Chaser

RP sample: The trip to Diagon Alley seemed to take forever to little Jessah Finnigan. Once the sign reading: The Leaky Cauldron, came into view she started running full speed towards it. She throw open the door to the pub and ran to the entrance to Diagon Alley, forgetting that the didnt have a wand yet she turned and walked back in to the pub.

" Good evening Miss Jessah, your first year huh?" Said Tom the bartender. She then answered "yea, Mr. Tom. I cant wait!" excidedly. The door to the pub opened and in walked Jessah's mother and twin siblings.
"you'd want the usual Gabrel?" asked Tom to Jessah's mother. Before she could answer Jessah grabbed her mother and tried as hard as her 11 year old self could towards the entrance to Diagon Alley. Her brother and sister joined them a second later, Aaden picked her up, placed her on his shoulders and then tapped the third brick on the right. The entrance to Diagon Alley showed itself. They entered...