~PHATOM~: ReVAMPed!

So, I've got some news.... BIG news....

if you remember my manga PHANTOM-which I was too lazy to ever update-well...Forget about it...Cuz I'm re-doing it. COMPLETELY NEW...

well...almost.

Ya see, the original story was:
Fidelia Ryius's world is turned upside down when the masked murderer and thief named Phantom starts to contact her through her dreams. After these strange dreams, this top secret orgnaization called the Midnight Riders appears at her door requesting that she help them find Phantom so they may detroy him. But Fidelia believs that there is good in everyone and that Phantom only wants her to help him. So which will she choose? To help the organization put a stop to Phantom or to help Phantom see that there is still light in his soul?

Yeah, and I really did like that story. But there were so many things I didn't like either. So I decided to redo it and make it a little different than that.

So what is the new ~PHANTOM~ gonna be like?

well, here's the new plot line(or the developeing one):
After a mysterious dream, young Fidelia Riyus's world begins to fall apart. The only ones who can help her are the Midnight Riders, detectives who specialize in Nightmares with Magical Influence. But when Fidelia and Detective Storm Rider discover that her Nightmares are coming from the evil Demon King Phantom, they are sent on a crazy adventure through the magical world of Alfetoria in order to put a stop to her nightmares and a war brewing between the people of day and the demons of night.

yeah. that's what PHANTOM: ReVAMPed is all about. It's a slightly new storyline where I decided to change quite a number of things. For Example:

1.) the original PHANTOM(that has never fully been seen) took place in a fantasy world. the ReVAMPed version takes place in both the real world and a fantasy world. You see, it takes place in an alternate steampunk version of our own world, set in the 24th Century, where Europe is primely controlled by the French and British Utopia and where Persia still exists, and now as a strong enemy, where the US is still just a set of colonies owned by England and where war amoungst nations is brewing.

2.) There are two worlds, so there are many different kinds of people. People from our world are called the "People of Day". People who are "Magical" or "Enchanted" are called the "Demons of Night". People with magical abilities are feared. Anyone who has become "Bewitched" is called a "Phantom"-hence the name(well, now anyway). People who are of mixed races(a parent of day and a parent of night) are called "Gypsy". The concept of gypsy in our world is not the same as in the universe of ~PHANTOM~: ReVAMPed. Another thing, you may have noticed that VAMP is capitalized in ReVAMPed. That's because another rare spin on "Deamons of Night" are Vampires, which play a dangerous and important role in the story. But don't worry, there's no sappy vampires like in Twilight, they don't even look human....Except for one, who plays an important part.

Okay, so those two points may sound like a mess but, trust me, it all makes sense in the end.

so, how have the characters changed? You wouldn't really know since you didn't actually know them.

So here's some info:

Fidelia Ryius-she's just a normal sixteen year old girl living in the French Countryside. She lives with her grandparents who are the only people she has left. But they die after she starts having strange dreams. She is sent to Paris where she meets the mysterious and handsome Detective Storm Rider(I'm sure you guys can connect the dots on where the Romance will be ) Personality wise, she is very calm and shy and sweet. She's a truly selfless person. She's also very smart and enjoys baking A LOT-It's something she does when she's stressed. Fidelia doesn't use fowl language and often lectures those who do in front of her. Her trademark phrases are "Oh Goodness" "Oops" and "Well, it could be worse" -these are phrases she uses often since she's clumsy and get's into trouble very easily.

Detective Storm Rider- He is just that, the Dashing Detective who helps Fidelia rid her dreams of a Demon calling himself "Phantom". Storm is unpredictable. Though he can be serious, most of the time he's rather charming and friendly(a total opposite of the original who was very rude and sexist). He also knows his way with women, but does not persue romantic relationships very often. Fidelia falls for his charm quickly but there are some things about him that she does not know and feels like she should fear.

Night St. Mair- My favorite character, he is Storm's goofy partner who is also a "Gypsy", or half-daychild and half-nightchild. He is funloving and has an ablity to see the future using tarot cards, but he can only see the future of one person and only can do this once. He refuses to predict Fidelia's future on many occasions.

then there are others that you will meet when I release this one...which won't be for a while I'm afraid. I've also got to continue with my KH fanmanga and also my manga Galaxy Idol as well as my manga Dark Legends and my new Digimon Fanfic: Fable and my FFXIII Fanfic StarStruck. so yeah, but I am excited to introduce you guys to ~PHANTOM~: ReVAMPed

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