~~PHANTOM~~

I've decided to put my full attention on Phantom. I've been rewriting and trying to figure this all out but here is what i can tell you:

*NOTE=it takes place in a fantasy world

Fidelia Ryius' world is turned upside down when the masked murderer and thief named Phantom starts to contact her through her dreams. After these strange dreams, this secret organization appears at her door requesting that she help them find Phantom. But Fidelia believes that there is good in everyone and that Phantom only wants her to help him.

So which will she choose? To help the organization put a stop to Phantom or to help Phantom see that there is still light in his soul?

Wat do u think? I really need critism in order to help me continue getting better. I'm pretty excited about this, so anything critism really helps.