Feels like suffocating...

Sorry, I couldn't resist.

I was listening to .977 Rock Channel on Screamer Radio today, and as the song came up (the one on my title), I came up with this:

Tell me:
How shall we see our lovers?
Through the eyes of sullen disregard
and put-upon mercy?

Or through the eyes
blinded by endless tears,
which, like curtains,
do wash blood away.

Oh my! How blinded we are!

Yet eyes will cut eyes,
and see us go down
in our lovers' arms:
We shall go laughing.

P.S. Has anyone volunteered for the mentorship program yet? I have, though my newbie hasn't responded yet.

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