I am writing a Novel! ... Please read

Right I have been working all over the world for a while now and have not been able to read as many manga or watch anime like I used to but I have been inspired to write.

I have only written a page just to see the general reaction people have to my idea. I would Appreciate it if anyone who reads this post would take the time to read my one page and tell me if it made them want to read on.

Please Read Here!

Thanks to anyone who does so

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