OK so here part of my fanifiction
that I've been working on but I just thought
that I give you guys a look at it
so you can tell me what you thank about it
but anyway so here is part of my fanifiction

walking home from a friend house
Hay you there someone side your pretty cute
your stop by the man who call you cute
you tell him to move out of the way
but the man try to get you to come with him you tell him no
at that time someone else hear you tell the man no
it's a nother man but this one come over tell the other man to back off
the other man saying way should I you be to scared to move the other man says well if don't then I'll just kill you the other man fearing for his life back off an runs way you still scared out of your mind
and not know what to do you look at the man who just save you
he has silver hair his headband covering his left eye
and he where a mask hiding his face when his ask you if your OK
you be not so scared now you say I'm fine his says thats good to hear
but what were you doing walking in this area alone for he ask you?
you tell him that you were go to your house but never been in this area before he tells you that this is a very bad area to be in if your alone
you say yeah I guess your right then he says well then should we go
then you say go were?well he says I thought I should walk you home
but you don't even know me and plus I don't know you said
he looks at you and he says I may not know but like I said this area
is pretty bad but if you want anther one of guys bugging then thats you
I just thought be nice and walk you home he said you say well I guess it's OK if you do that he says Oh right then lets go then
so you start walking home with him and as you are walking with him
you notice that he keeps look at you then look alway you ask why?
he says why what? you say why do you keep look at then look alway?
Oh that he says well because your just a bite different
you look him an say how am I different?he says not in a bad way
I mean in a good way you look at him and say is there a such thing
as be different in a good way?he says yes there is you ask him
how so? well he says its hard to say in words but there just is OK
you look at him once again and say well if you say so but how
I am different in a good way you ask him?but before he can tell
you your already home and you tell him that this your house
he says Oh so this is were you live its nice you say well
think you its not much but its home to me then he says well
I should get go then you say wait may ask your name?he says
sure can and he tell that its Kakashi Hatake you ask if you'll
see him again?he says yeah you'll see me around I'm sure of that
after that then he leave