- Created By firane55
Elemental Sneek Peek: Hyota vs. Shoji
OK
i'm gonna post a small bit of the story Elemental
but first, i'll tell u the background
the story is centered around a boy named Hyota Kyugi.
in the beginning, he's only eight, and he's still that age at this point of the story
hes brought to the spirit temple under false pretenses and is now undergoing a vigorous test against the special forces commander, Shoji.
A Blue light engulfs the room and Hyota emerges out of the crater with eyes glowing crimson, and surrounded by blue lightning. The energy pours out of Hyota as a huge shock wave blows Shoji backward. He slams into the wall, creating a large crater as well as an earthquake-like vibration. Shoji, a bit dazed, stands up in awe. "What the....that can't be....that wimpy lil' kid can't have such an intense aura...."
Hyota, walking closer to Shoji begins to speak, " HOW DARE YOU ATTACK MY LIVING BEING YOU DESOLATE SPIRIT! I WILL SEE TO YOUR FULL AND PAINFUL OBLITERATION!"
Jumo(for all you people who don't know, Jumo is the 2nd top spirit in the temple) looks from afar next to Kymori(also, this guy is the head spirit of Temple)"Sir, what kind of bizarre phenomenon is this?! Thi-this cannot be Hyota. It can't!" Jumo finishes stumped.
" It's Raiton...He's channeling through the boy...This is one of the many stages an Elemental can achieve.." Kymori responds coldly.
Shoji, standing a few feet away, hears Kymori's explanation. "Raiton.....is him?! this is unbelievable! it truly is!!" Shoji yells in bewilderment.
The other spirits can only stare in silence as they witnessed a moment of rarity. The entwining power of an Elemental.
"SPIRIT..STAND BEFORE MY JUDGMENT....AND PERISH!!!!"
Hyota vanishes and appears in a flash behind shoji. With a bat of his hand, he hurls Shoji into the air and across the room. "GYUUAH!!" Shoji yelled in pain.
He ricochets off the wall, creating a body shaped crater. Hyota's body walks closer to Shoji, who lies motionless on the ground. "Raiton.Chidori."(Lightning:Thousand Birds)Raiton whispers.
the blue light again engulfes the room, but this times emits from Hyota's palm.
Standing a few feet away of Shoji, Raiton begins to bellow "NOW DIE AND ROT IN YOUTON'S DOMAIN!!"(youton's domain referring to hell because of the lava sprit living in the core of the planet)
...And that's it..
well don't get mad, im not gonna tell u the whole fight, its like 5 pages long or sumthin
so tell me what u think....leave a comment below and if u got any suggestions, feel free to let me know.
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Elemental: secret posts
I'll be posting parts of my devolping story, Elemental from time to time over the next six months..
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the sneek peeks on Elemental will be in order, but wont be a couple pages. to put it more simply, they'll be small excerpts, maybe a page, usually will be about explaining and maybe some fights, i dunno. *THEY WILL BE FROM DIFFERENT PARTS OF THE STORY* 
