it's much better now!
I would submit it here, but the pages are a bit big, the language a bit... language-y (mild swears... and then a potty mouth where you least expect it) and stuff like that...
If anyone doesn't have a SmackJeeves but has a DeviantArt account, I COULD start updating it there as well.... but would anyone be interested?
asdfghjkl I need a new banner for it OTL but I haven't finished even INKING the picture I would consider using (that is, This)
or I could use one of THESE sketches of Mai... or my new ones of her in different costumes that I haven't put up yet....
or one of THESE witches even...
By the Way, I originally used THIS
also! I'm submitting THIS to THIS challenge,
think it would be accepted?