I change the title from 'Music is my life' to 'My Music' instead.
I change the clothes as well T^T.
the top one is looking like a girl than the lineart who became a guy argh lol.

Its the eyes, I moved the other eye more upper to match the head though didnt match the whole thing, traditional is much easier for me >:

I wanna learn how to lineart properly *goes to the can't-draw-proper-lineart corner*