i'm posting a story i've been writeing! i got the first the two parts of the first chapter... if you find time to read it can you give me an honest responce... i'm trying to make it as good as it can be... so i will even take a negitive responce positively! ^_^ it just means a little more work but at least it will be the way i want it!

http://www.theotaku.com/worlds/fangvsfang