hey! yeah most of my story has been redone and now beter! but there was no large change in the first capter. but most of the changes are in chapter 3 and up! there is also an extra part in chapter 2!
small chapter 2 spoiler you get to read about what happens when Night trys to change his nightmares about his mothers death

...wow... that didn't spoil anything... oh well!

special note for tammy i love you!