Sorry it's taking so long for me to put Chapter one up, im trying to make it good.Anyways, from the opinions from my friends they really like it so far,so yay! :3 I've actually gotten complaints about it though *le gasp! :0* all from religous people (no offense to those who are) but they were saying how messed up it is but oh well people like and some don't for those who don't then don't read it,it's that simple ._.