In need of comic critisisim

If the title throws you off cuz it has nothing to do with my trip dont freak.
If you didnt notice i was back yesterday which is earilier than planned and the reason why is simple...get ready.....My sister is a total selfish bitch and pretty much ruined the trip for everyone, even though she was the one who wanted to go in the first place she started arguements with everyone at every chance she could get or she was pouty. Not being able to take this bull shit from her we came home, im even lucky that i even got to go to Mammoth Cave cuz she had a huge fight or something really retarded with my dad on monday because her dogs got tangled in their chains while she was gone and we didnt fix them and that my dog al was just on a leash, but he was still tied down but she started yelling at us saying my dad likes my dog more.....May i repeat that my sister is s total bitch? Well she is, if you arent entertaining her and doing it her way she bitches at you...so here i am...home early.

Well on one of the days we went out into the woods and got covered in ticks!!.....isnt that exciting?

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Well anyway the reason for the title is that im just not happy with how my comic pages turn out and im not sure why...is it the layout, the panels the way i color or just the way i draw? Someone help me here! And dont tell me im crazy and that my comics are superawesomeness! because i know better and i really want to get better!

As for updates i dont want to start updating till i have the chapter drawn out and i only have 5 right now because why?*points up*

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