There is an RPG on live journal that i want to join called Moska(sp) University.

It is so hard to get into.

I posted an application for it and it had to include a little short story showing off how well you know the character you want to play.

I want to play as Kyo Sohma.

They answered back that my grammar sucks(didnt say sucks but thats pretty much that it said) and that i didnt show enough characterization.

.....Kyo isnt hard to figure out so i dont know what else they want...