My Sample Story Revised.^^

"Ok...Now how the hell did I end up in a stupid place like this!!?” Kyo screamed at the top of his lungs at the top of a cliff. "I know I haven't been traveling for so freaking long that I would end up at the ocean, I’m I even supposed to end up here!!" He turned around to look back into the woods. He yanks the letter that he got a couple days before out of his pocket. He just wanted to rip it up so badly. “You know what?! I don’t even want to go to this stupid school any more!!”

"What is up with these stupid directions?! I left that stupid dog's house about 6 hours ago....How in the hell did I end up here!!!!!" He stared down at the water, then looks down at the letter again, “...I get this freaking letter inviting me to this university telling me that they wanted me and that they could help me...then their directions suck!! What the hell…And I really wanted to get stronger too." He squats down and stares out at the ocean. “I guess I have no other choice!!” He jolts up and gets ready to dive down the cliff when suddenly a storm starts to pick up around the cliff extremely quickly. The sky turns almost black and lightning starts to flash all over the place.

"What the hell? It was so peaceful just a couple of moments ago..." Kyo mumbled to himself, looking all around him. Suddenly a lightning strikes some trees behind him and starts a blaze behind him. He was trapped; there was no easy way out, either down the rocky cliff or through the blaze. But he was about to jump so what does it matter? "What the F-?" Then just a couple seconds later another bolt strikes the side of the cliff and it starts to crumble under Kyo's feet. "Wha?!" He doesn’t manage to get out of the way and he starts to fall down the cliff and into the water. “Shhhiiiiiittt!” He screams.

The plunge into the water knocks the wind out of him and he passes out. Soon after that his lifeless body gets washed up to shore. He twitches and slowly opens his eyes, then after coming to in a second he shoots up and runs up onto the beach.

"Aahhh! I hate the getting wet!" He rips his shirt off and rings it out. "What the hell was that?! I could have been killed!" He seemed to be talking to the trees. "What in the? Where did the cliff go?! There is just something not right about this place!"

He started to just run through the woods. "Stupid strange letter!! What is going on here?" Up ahead there he noticed a break in the trees. "Yes I can finally get out of this hell hole!!" But when he got there what he found wasn’t what he was expecting at all. He seemed to have stumbled onto some sort of campus.

"No...No way....is this it? Is this the University? But how did I? Is this even possible? He said to himself in awe. “…Yes! Finally! After all that crap this better be good!!” He runs onto the campus to check it out.

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