Buried Secrets

Number of Members: Four

Summery:

Ridgefield, Montana. From the outside it looks like a normal, close-nit town. Flourishing crops and roaring waterfalls. Fields of flowers that never seem to end and festivals every month. Friendly citizens and exceptional schools. Anyone who passes through the town would think it would be a wonderful place to live. Wrong.Most of the people who live in Ridgefield don’t know it, but it’s not an ordinary town. It never was. What happened could be easily explained in two words: Bloody Mary.

The legend claims that the evil woman can be summoned by chanting "Bloody Mary" into a mirror anywhere from three to one-hundred times in a darkened room lit only by a candle. (Thirteen seems to be the most popular number of chants, appropriately so.) The bathroom is the most popular setting to test out the legend, but other dark rooms seem applicable.

After the given amount of chants, the spirit will then appear in a mirror to claw your eyes out. Death will follow. Other variations have her driving you insane or pulling you into the mirror, never to be seen again. Legend has it that if you are near a mirror in total darkness, she can still come for you, regardless of whether or not you're trying to call for her. What really happened?

Mary was a little girl whose mother killed her. Now she’s just a revenge seeking spirit. But she’s not herself anymore. She’s becomes mutated, morphed into a Demonic spirit with the ability to harm the living. And she’s flanked by other Demonic spirits who have the same goal:Kill the living.

However, the little Bloody Mary was first haunting the world of the living, a priest blessed the town, making sure Mary and her friends could not harm anyone in the town. On that day, she also cursed the town. She said, in a raspy voice;

“One day, children will summon me and break that blessing you put over this town. One day, they will make a séance. One day, I will return. And there is nothing you can do to stop it…"

Nowadays, this tale is one that mothers tell their children to make them behave. The ones who believe this tale, are resented and put into mental wards. The history faded into myth, myth into legend, legend into stories. Everything was still the same.

Until new teenagers move into the town. These teens seem normal and human….but their life has been a lie. They, in fact, have special powers, abilities no normal Human can have. Though they don’t know it yet, they are the only ones who can save the town…after they are the ones that put it in danger in the first place. Ridgefield still goes on like before but these kids start seeing things…and hearing them. There are shadows when no one’s there to make them, voices when no one is there to speak to them, light flickering, temperatures acting up, thick liquid running down the walls.When they find out what they can do and what lurks in the past of Ridgefield, will the embrace what they were destined to do, or will they succumb to the dangerous secrets that have stayed buried for so long?

Personal Opinion: I really can not wait for this rp to start! I'm apart of her other rp and so far, it's been a lot of fun :) Not only is the intro beautifully written, I love the background, and the basic plot sounds very interesting.

Number of Pages: Two (It hasn't started yet.)

Based off of or Personal: Hmm, I feel like it's a bit of both. First based is the Bloody Mary thing, but it also seems personal from the bit of mystery and suspense you get from the intro.

Interesting Notes:
The plot, most plots I see they are pretty obvious, not much time put into it, and wouldn't hold a rp for more than a few weeks or maybe a month.
The background--Is awesome! owo I love it. I wana know if you edited it at all...

Recommend To: Now, this is just what I'm getting from the intro, so I'm sorry if I'm wrong. But I guess people who are looking for a bit more of a darker rp, if that's the word....? Or I guess mystery/horror/suspense? Action? *doesn't know and should ask Bli*....

Age Ranking: I don't know o.o It's always hard reviewing when a rp hasn't really started. I might update this review later once it's started.

Recommends to Make it Better: I actually can't see much... Maybe a picture of banner for the intro? And the link to DA's OC doesn't work. More members (and hopefully this post will help with that..) so it's a little bigger rp group, but you know, not like huge.

...Darn, I wish I could save the picture, but it's not letting me T^T;

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