Kingdom Hearts fanfic: I still care Chapters 1-3 1/2

This is not yaoi. Do Not take it as such. Rating: T, there's blood and stuff.Just being safe I guess.
I Still Care
Disclaimer: I do not own Kingdom Hearts (unfortunately).
Chapter One
"No, Isa!" Lea spat, "You gave up on us! All you cared about was yourself. Maybe you weren't the one to plunge the world into darkness, but you sure didn't help bring it back. You don't deserve forgiveness, what you deserve is imprisonment!" "Ah! No! Lea, I'm sorry! Please, you don't understand! No!" He was thrown into a cell that was too dark to see anything, and he couldn't breathe. "No! Please! You don't understand! No, Lea!! I'm sorry!!!"
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Axel was strolling down the hallway in the Castle That Never Was. Yeah... there was no way he was sleeping tonight. He could blame that on all the sugar he ate. In his defense, the cookies would've had no purpose without him eating them. Apparently, no-one else was having a good time attempting to sleep, either. A yelp echoed from a room down the hallway. He peeked in. Demyx had apparently been playing with an action figure instead of sleeping. "Be quiet," Axel whispered, "there are some people who did get to sleep, let 'em have their rest." "Oh, sorry," Demyx whispered, and started playing more quietly. Axel wandered once more. A wail came from Zexion's room, and Axel went in there, too. Zexion was tossing restlessly in bed, his covers shoved down. He was groaning and sniffling a bit. "Hey, shhh.... Its okay.." Axel said. Zexion stirred a bit. "Uhn...? S'rry..." he mumbled. "Its okay.." Axel put his hand on Zexion's forehead. No fever, just a bad dream. "Ok.. Sleep well." He left. "What the heck? Why is no-one having any luck sleeping? Eh.. whatevs."
All of a sudden, a shout came from down the hall. "No! Lea, I'm sorry! Please no!!" "I- Saïx?" He jogged down to Saïx's room.

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Sorry, I was sick so I thought I'd write this.