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Chapter 6 giant bat
So every one got on the bus. Leon got behind the wheel. Neno’s dad it to meet us at Missouri at the arch then well fly to new York. So the gang set out to Missouri. Trevor, Kirk and Allen were loading the guns, garret and neno were talking. Shelby, Maya, and Rebecca were making supper. They stopped for awhile so they can eat. Zombies were walking towards the bus. Then Shelby stood up. There are zombies outside. How do you now said garret. It’s a long story. So Leon and Kirk on top of the bus and started shooting then a big bat cam out of the sky it was eating the zombies and also coming towards the bus, so allen, Trevor, Rebecca and Maya ran out of the bus and started shooting the bat while Shelby, garret and neno shot the zombies. This is for my team yelled garret and neno. When the bat got done eating the zombies it started towards the bus. Shit yelled Maya I’m out of ammo ill be right back. Then the bat attack. Trevor flew over the bus, Rebecca hit the side of the bus. Then Maya came out shooting, and then the bat picked up Allen and flew off. Shelby ran after the bat shooting but it was to late. She walked back to the bus. Leon and kirk helped Rebecca up and Trevor came walking around the bus. We need to go now and allen may be dead so every one got back in the bus and went to bed.