I don't really like the style I was trying, so I'm writing like a normal person...

"Happy Birthday to you!" We finish singing to my, just turned 5 year old sister, Yumi. I grab a small bowl of strawberries, as a new maid hands out cake to the little kids. The maid starts to give me a piece and is startled when my mother rudely tells her I don't eat sweets, and to never offer me sweets again, or she's fired!The poor girl bursts into tears, as another maid takes over the cake giving. I glare at Mother, and storm from the room! Why must she make such a big deal out of it?!? I get to my destination(the music room) and slam the door. I then pull out my diary, and start writing.