ok so these are things that i think up..... alot of tehm on the bus.. because i have time to sink into my head then. sorry if you hate them... i LIKE metaphor... and eloquence... or my attempt at eloquence... these all kinda suck so just ignore them...i'm putting them here so i won't forget them... they hold meaning to me. so comment if you want. tell me what i could do better. tell me if you likey.... i kinda have an abstract style that usually ends up kinda dark...
lemme know what you think.
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in winter
in the shreiking cold
you can almost feel the trees
yearning to withdraw their
feet from the confines
of earth
so that they may
press their naked
acheing
breaking
bodies togeather to
propogate warmth and feeling
in numb limbs
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contusion grins widely
reveals dark wet
sharp incisors
hands make skin
shiver
in disgust and sickening yearning
inhuman hands of bark and thorn
human nakedness
agaist penetration
gazes of wet stone eyes
body pressed aginst housing
as life is escalated
another drained
life given to the immortal
