Sneak peek at wip story

This came to me in the midst of a mind numbingly horrible virus infection 2 weeks back. Which is kind of funny considering how completely out of it I was. With that in mind, so far there is no set structure to the story as my inspiration is very ungrounded in its ways and will only give me the words to write down. Maybe one day I will actually tame it to plan things out more thoroughly than a general idea of different plot points taking place somewhere in the story.

Any and all suggestions/critique is welcomed with open arms/ears/eyes.