Labeling

O.K. the reason I made this world is to get back at all the teachers that criticized an unimportant part of any thing I wrote and had turned in. Like if I asked them to check the spelling they would say stuff about the punctuation. Here's the story about this essay.
"This is a really good way to show how little kids could be if they have any special powers."
"Thank you I think the teacher liked it, but I saw her making a few notes on it."
"Don't worry about it. Teacher's coming!
"I would like to talk to you out in the hallway."
Killing some one may not have been the smartest move. Oh well.
"Do you know how many short essays we've done in this school year?"
"Five?"
"And how many writing styles have you done?"
"One."
"Why don't you do something new and creative? Add color and design."
"I think that is irrelevant to my writing. I write a certain way for certain topics."
"I'm not asking you to write differently. I'm asking you to organize it differently."
"No."
Now I've thought about it, I should have put what the date of the days it took place.

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June 24, 1985

Hello I'm Solicio, I'm in the 2nd grade, and I can see how people die. The cause of death will be on either side or behind the person unless it's a crash that happens to the front or top of the person. The way people die is like a moving colored shadow. When the shadow first appears they're just a distortion of lighting , then as the day of the person's death comes the shadow gains color and the movement of how the person die, Finally when the day of the death is here the shadow is gone. The shadows usually appears 5 days to a month before the person dies.

I live in a suburban area of a city, so I only see the shadows when I go into the city for viola lessons. There's so many color shadows in the city it's like there's a second city people don't know about. The reason I have this journal is because that when I told my parents about what I see they didn't know what to do so they gave me this journal to keep me quite.

June5, 1987:Malline

Today Malline invited me over to her house to play. when I saw Malline I couldn't see her clearly then I looked at her mother she was a little clearer. O.K. there's 3 reasons why Malline and her Mother are blurry 1)I have been practicing too long or too late, 2)I forgot to wear my contact lenses, or 3) there going to die.

June 8, 1987

I saw Malline on the subway back home today. It was partly crowded with people so she didn't see me. Malline looked like she was covered in dirt. Malline is probably going to die soon because her shadow had it's color and was swaying side to side.

June 15, 1987

It's been a week since I saw Malline on the subway and no one has said any thing about some one dead.I'm hopping that I can go to the park near Malline's house.

June 17, 1987

I had my sitter take me to the park near Malline's house. When I got there Malline and her Mother were on there way leaving and Malline stop to tell me she's coming to my consort my viola teacher makes every one do. Malline was covered in layers of dirt with dirt clumps sticking to her and she had long deep cuts. Her Mother looked like she was soaked through her skin and her skin was blue like she was really cold or from lack of air. The shadow was moving from Malline to her Mother, it looked like it was trying to hit Malline with something and it was trying to push Malline's Mother. When I thought about it there's a grassy area with a lake on the way to Malline's home from where the consort is. Malline's Mother probably had an accident and the shadow was trying to hep them but didn't work.

June 19, 1987

I was wrong how Malline and her mother would die. Before they could came to the consort some one broke into their house, pushed Malline's mother into the pool, and took Malline where they buried her alive near Shark River.