Some Help, Anyone?

Hey, everyone! Tis Rishi. Rishi was just wondering if she could ask everyone a little favor...

Could everyone please read this fanfiction and tell Rishi on things she needs to improve on? It's a Christmas fic, so Rishi wants everything to be nearly perfect before she asks for it to be published. ^^

Rishi needs a title for it, too, so if you could help, that would be great...