I posted this post on a wrong world and when I modified it, it was on the 3rd page of teh biju club the day before yesterday. im not sure if poeple saw my post so... im reposting it. ^ ^'
Finally, from that long journey on foot, I was in Japan again. Scars and blisters were on my bare feet from the rocks and earth i walked and stumbled upon. The white T-shirt became dirty with dirt and mud on it. I didnt care if my ears and 7 tails were showing... i just had a cold and i couldnt do anything about it. 6 days and 7 nights without sleeping... just walking... no eating... just dazing. "Chiyoko, you cannot go on in this condition you are in. Let me take over your body and you rest", Grandfather scold me. "...no..." I replied. "But if you continue in this condition you will die... we will die!", yelled. He sounded more serious. "I dont care, grandfather", I told him, twiching my ears from the cold air. "CHIYOKO LISTE-" "Silence...", I interupted. I stabbed him with my chakra once again and he screamed in pain. "I know what the conciquences are... i dont give a damn...." I walked leaning from side to side. I guess my body was weak. I didnt want to rest here... not now.. I just want to get away from his chakra presence.
I smelt blood in the air and people screaming. A bijuu perhaps... For some reason, i didnt like that word. bijuu... bijuu... I repeated the word in my head. Tailed demon... hated monster... destruction... A person ran into me and i fell to the ground. "Young lady, you must run away from this area at once. There are DEMONS fighting!", the woman said, holding out her hand. I got my struggling body up and started to walk again, ignoring the woman's hand. "You must rest, Chiyoko..." I ignored my grandfather. He talked too much and was desprate to get control of my body. Why should I listen to him... to anybody? He didnt care... no one did...
I saw Suki Kyuubi and Hachimata fighting. I didnt stop them. It was their fight. Althought Hachimata and Kyuubi's chakra seemed a little different.... it wasnt them. It was another person inside them... a clone per se? A fool couldnt tell if they were their dark side or not. I couldnt care less. "Kyuubi...", I mumbled. Did he care? Do he still love me? Does he want me to be killed...? Maybe so... most likely... I walked on. "Killing is pointless... fighting has no meaning... why do people fight instead of working out problems? So pointles...fighting...", I said to myself. "Yes... if you kill a person, what then...? Will you continue killing for no purpose... no purpose at all? For the joy of it...? What joy... I-" "You should stop talking to yourself. People will wonder", Grandfather interupted. "You are right, grandfather", I said. I sneezed, wiped my nose and continued to walk where ever my body takes me.
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Yes yes. Chiyoko is very dull. I wanted to include Asuka in my part but I thought that someone else will put her in. Note that she calls people by their first name now... hmmm.....
~Shattered, Dull Chiyoko
Sheeze we all have inner crap to deal with hahahhahaha. ok on with the story.
"Kyuubi rescued me," I hissed, "And now it'sss my turn to repay that debt."
"You can't even lay a hand on......"
My foot was in his jaw before he could react.
"No but I can certainly plant a foot," I smirked.
"Are you having fun?" D. Kyuubi asked.
"Quite a lot," I answered.
Kai tried to rush it, but I stopped him.
"Kai thissssss isssss very dangerous for Maki and Aki! Get them out of here!" I yelled.
"Ok," Kai said helping Maki pick Aki up and running away. I sighed relief. At least D. Kyuubi couldn't use them now. Suddenly my eye caught anotheer in the battlefeild. It was Yuri! What in the world was she doing here?
"Yuri!" I yelled, "Run!"
She looked at me, turned, and fled. I sighed again. Suki was the only one remaining and I knew she was strong enough to survive.
Kyuubi wiped his mouth with his hand. I had apaently spilled some blood. He seemed adjitated now.
"Hachimata, I will kill you for that," D. Kyuubi growled, "And then I will hunt down everyone and kill them!"
"The biju king......" I hissed, "In chessss we are on the sssame ssside, but now....I will beat some ssssenssse into you."
"You will try and I will kill you," D. Kyuubi answered.
The fight began with punches and kicks, but soon became chakra taxing jutsus. I was already running a tad low thnaks to Dark, but Kyuubi seemed to have no disadvantage. His attaks were ruthless. I tried to defend myself, but he made one lage using several kunai one stabbing straight through my shoulder piercing the scalpula. Blood danced in red globs falling, and I sank to the ground.
"Hachimata," D. Kyuubi said walking over to me as I tried to fight to stand. It was not working well. My hand was at the wound, but blood continued to pool out onto the grass staining the green a vibrant red.
"You're blood," D. Kyuubi said, "Will be a treat to spill."
He moved down to my level his head level with mine. I hissed, but he seemed not to care. I could not move with the kunai pinning me to the wall. Kyuubi smirked as he got closer. Finally he whispered a few inches away from my ear.
"Good-bye Hachimata," he whispered.
His hand went to the kunai still enloged in my shoulder, and he pulled it straight out. My blooed exploded and covered the ground in a red blanket. I closed my eyes and relaxed as blood dripped from my lips.
"And this time.....Suki won't save you," were the last words I heard.
....I'm stunned. My plan went from good to bad to worse. Now, Yurikami would never love me the way we loved ever again. That's when I smiled evilly. Yoshida-Chan would be mine and mine alone today....
(Phase A)
For now on, I'm making the sand follow Yoshida-Chan inorder to protect, to talk, to hug, and if I wanted to, rape her. Next, I drank some sake, but suddenly felt strange. In my mind, I'm seeing another me.
"Who are you!?!" I said. The other me smiled.
"I'm the Drunken you..."
"Oh, what do you want?"
"Since you and I are the same demon, I'm going to help you get Yuri-Chan back!"
"What's the catch? I give up my life and you take over? You getting everything in my will?"
"No, just drink more sake."
"Deal."
(Phase B)
I, now a 50-foot tall drinking monster, saw what was left of the fighting that was going on. I then saw Deiara, flying towards me with her clay bird and she had Jess.
"Here's Jess, un. I saved her from killing herself." Deiara explained.
"I'm not a baka.........." Jess muttered as I saw tears strolling down her cheeks.
"Look, *hic* keep Jessy-Chan safe. Also *hic* want to help get a mate?" I asked Deiara.
"What's in it for me, un."
"*hic*$4,000,000,000 in Credit." I pulled out my credit card.
"Deal, un."
(Phase C)
I'm going to kill whoever dissed Jess that way. My claws grew bigger as I grew bigger. I can't believe that the Akatsuki were still here....
"We are going to capture ya!!!!" Kisame screamed. Itachi slapped his forehead. Then everyone, demons, akatsukis, everybody was fighting someone. I hate it when they fight and I'M not in it...
"QUIET!!!!!!!!" I roared loudly. Everyone froze. I was causing many earthquakes.
"Okay, *hic* which one of you bozos started this whole THING? I'll RIP OUT THEIR OWN BODY IF I HAVE TO!!!!" I was slashing the air with my claws and was breathing heavily. Deiara calmed me down a little. I heard some music with my huge raccoon ears. I turned at Tobi.
"Tobi stole Demon Trio CD from Leader-Sama!" Tobi smiled. Man, that human was random. With my sand, I grabbed the CD player and played the first song Animal I Have Become. That fits my mood. The full moon bacame yellow, like my hungry eyes. My stomach growled even more. I licked my lips repeatly as I looked around at everyone. But mostly Teme. Teme hurt Jess. And now, teme will be my prey....
"I say, retreat! Naara, you stay here." Pein said as the Akatsuki left. Naara groaned impatiently.
"YEAH! BRING IT ON FROM ANYWHERE!!! TEME, YOU WILL BE KILLED THEN EATEN FIRST. GIANT SAND SHURIKEN!!!" I yelled, getting excited.
Someone continue...
~Drunk, Hungry Shukaku
[Kyuubi]
I managed to take over for a slim time, but D. Kyuubi resisted and I was repelled back into my mind. D. Kyuubi was different from me, way different. Not only did I not like killing innocent people, but his looks differed too. I had black hair and light red eyes, and he had dark whiskers, blood-red eyes, and longer and spikier red hair. He also always kept his fox ears and tail out during fights. Our clothes were even different. He wore a white male kimono and his chest was shown just like Sasuke.
I had to find a way to get him out of controlling me. I got up from the ground, but dark chains shot up, grabbing both ankles, both wrists, and even my neck. They forced me to sit on the ground. These will make sure you don't try any more funny business.
I growled. "NO! I'LL TAKE YOU DOWN! I KNOW HOW TOO!"
How do you plan to do that? You're chained up. I suggest you think quick. Dark was taken down and I plan on getting Hachimata's blood and wearing his snakeskin as a belt. HEHEHEHEH...
[D. Kyuubi]
Hachimata thought he was going to defeat me? "Hachimata, you know what I hate? I recall that I met you in New York, am I correct? Kyuubi was so mad I was released and I knocked you out... But what I hate is being locked in a shell of a body that's rightious and cares only about love and friends. I hate him as much as that brat Naruto! And what I hate the most is that bloody racket you call music! Singing just gives me headaches and wants to make me kill even more."
"Are you jusssst all talk no action? I don't really care for your gloatsssss."
"I wonder if you'll be able to to defeat me and save your Kyuubi," I scoffed, "I doubt it, he'll be dead before you even lay a finger on me!"
Suki had given me some of her chakra. It was so strong that I knew I could do the jutsu with it. The jutsu needed a lot of chakra and without Ryusemi I was sure I would never be strong enough to do it. Now I could.
"Dark...." I said as my hands worked, "You thought you gained everything.....you were wrong. I am Hachimata not you. And I will prove it to you."
My hands finished the jutsu and I felt Suki's chakra go to work. "Destruction of the soul" I hissed. It was a jutsu I had come to hate using. It had taken Suki's dark side but my memories of her. I now did it on myself. The darkness around me shattered like glass reveiling white light. Dark appeared infront of me. His eyes pressed into me.
"Hachimata," he said sharply, "Did you really think that wassss going to work on me? we are the same! We know each other to a degree that we are one full soul."
"You didn't know...." I panted, "That I was alive."
"Yesssss," Dark hisssed, "That isssss true and I applaud my lessser half of thinking of that."
"You are the weak one," I hissed.
"heh I would ssssay you are. You sssslept and let me have the reigns becaussse you were too weak to undersssstand your own feelingssss, and assssss punisssshment, I will end the life of the girl you hold mossst dear."
"NO!" I yelled.
Suddenly I felt an explosion of chakra run through me. It was my own. I had had it all along! I felt the anger at Dark and our fight began.
"Dark barage!" Dark yelled.
"Chidori!" I yelled back.
[To Kai]
As I fought Dark he seemed to be slowing down. He even stopped and started clawing at his head. Hachi! I thought. It looked like my brother was alive. Dark continued to drive his nails into Hachi's skin yelling the entire way. I wondered what the fight looked like.
[Back to Hachi]
Dark was fast and strong. A more worthy oponet had never lived. We both used seperate chakras and fired attacks. We kicked and punched and drove our fangs into each other, but neither of us would fall. Finally we both stopped. Bleeding and breathing heavily, we stopped.
"Hachimata, you are truely the massster of fighting," Dark said as blood rushed from a slash I had maimed him with. My fangs had driven into him, but he had tried to remove them and had ended up doing more damage to himself.
"You are ssstrong asssss well," I answered.
"But we both know how to settle thisssss," Dark said.
"No more pawnsssss," I answered.
"King on King one last attack," Dark finished.
"Get ready," i said. I used the last of my chakra to make one more chidori. Dark made one last snake fang barage. Our forces collided, but I was teh stronger and destroyed Dark then and there. I felt the control of my body shift back to me. I turned my head and saw Kai.
"Hachi?" Kai asked.
"I'm ssssorry Kai," I smiled, "For making you worry about me."
There was a puddle of water nearby, and I looked it to see my brown hair and brown eyes. I was myself again. Maki was crying and I walked over to her.
"Get away!" Maki yelled, "Aki Aki are you ok? Aki!"
"Maki, I'm me," I said.
Maki turned and looked at me. Her eyes seemed to flood with more tears.
"Maki I'm fine," Aki said, "Hachimata? I don't feel anything dark anymore."
"Dark is dead," I answered, "And I will never let him live again."
"Good" Aki answered.
"So Dark is dead," D. Kyuubi said his voice seemed to drive nails into my spine.
"Yessss," I said turning.
"So that is what that weakling was doing. Arising you heh. Then I'll just kill you Hachimata."
"Fight then."
"When I tasted your blood before, it was iced and just the way I liked it. Looks like I will get to sample some more."
"Bring it," I answered.
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This was.....incredibly hard to write. *fall over* Someone please continue.....
