Biju Song (needs more work)

Me:*goes into room*Okay our first two rookies is Neka-chan and Gobi-kun? Oh well! I listened to one of my cds and I found a song, thus giving me an idea. This is the first part of the song. I dunno the real name for the original song, so if you reconize this song, please help me complete this. It's about how we deal with our jinchuriki. Warning! Since I like killing and blood, I will only put a lil' of it in the song:

Verse 1:
While They was schemin'
I was a demon in a bemur just be bemmin'
I can't believe the jinchurikis are cheatin'
So I found another way to make them pay for it all

So I went
In the forest on a killin' spree-a
And on the way I met
Kyuubi and Neka
And as the blood start sprayin'
I brought everything away

Opps! There goes their dreams they used to say
Opps! There goes the times we spent away
Opps! There goes the power we had
But They cheated on us
And it's bad now
Opps! There goes the minds that we made a home
Opps! There goes They never leave us alone
Opps! For all the lies they told, This is what you owe.

Chorus:
Hey Bjiu!
When your hosts are givin' up while
Just go back & hit them up Style
Get your claws on their lives for all the hard times

Oh!
When ya control them, everythang goes
From their crib, to the ride and the prose
For you gotta let them know that
If they mess up, ya gotta hit them up!

Like it? No jinchuriki are harmed in the making of this first draft song. Tell me if I should continue this.

~Shukaku

End