Hello peoples i am writing my frist story i hope you like it, if you have any idea to help it send me a private message plex.

"Omg i cant belive him, he did it again he his horrible. But every time i try to break up with him my heart whats him i cant stand this anymore," said Gabby. "I hate that school is my only time i cant hide from him. all of my classes he is in it is like every time i turn around he is there. I go home and get a knock on my door and there he is and he comes in with no ask."

GABBY is a young 14 year old girl, she has blood red hair and her skin is
whiter then the stubit twilight vampires that glow and glitter

anyway GABBY is very classey she always looks like a lawer but she wants to be a cheif but her father is a lawer who graduated from harvard law and she all ready has a spot for her and GABBY has to do what he says or he will hurt her. Her father is volent he will grab GABBY and punch her is the shoulders but he never really gets a chance to because she is very quiet and never does anything to upset her father. GABBYS mother died two years ago in a car crash her mother was driving and gabby was in the back seat and when her mom was hit head on by a druck driver GABBY went flying forward out the windsheid but she did not die because there he was holding her with his long tan arms.