Sorry to say, but I am half-re-writeing "Tenken: Heaven's wanderer".
You might have to re-read all four chapters! Please don't leave me for this, I enjoy having people read all I have written! I noticed some plot flaws, Culture miss-understandings, and some Personality flaws, and I need to fix it otherwise I might go insane.

Please bare with me. *bows repetitively*