Some quick things to note after reading this chapter:
- Vittorio’s devices in Vevila are independent of XL’s agenda, so he’s not going to randomly pop in anytime soon. One someone takes Vittorio’s tracker out of her arm and XL’s tracker from her head, Vittorio won’t be able to locate her anyway.
- With his devices, Vittorio knows where Vevila is, what she sees and hears, and her current health state. His devices are located in various parts of her body.
- Vittorio can’t read Vevila’s mind with his devices--he was exaggerating. He can get a good idea of how she’s feeling, though, because his devices track her heart rate/blood pressure/sweat production/etc.
- Vittorio was the narrator for this chapter, but I’m still not sure if I’m going to permanently make him the narrator. I think I’m going to go back to an non-character narrator who narrates from 3rd person limited to Vevila’s perspective after this.
- I still haven’t decided if Vittorio was the narrator for the previous 3 chapters.
- If I make posts from Vittorio’s perspective, it’ll probably be about Vevila’s experimentation in the past. The letters here were pretty vague, so I might expand on them some time by writing some Vittorio posts.
- Oh, and I'm making a profile for Vittorio, too.
So yup, there's that... hope I didn't make up too much random stuff for all of this to be bad for the MCC. ""orz Sorry she didn't talk to anyone this chapter.
I think my next post will include some dialogue between characters and Vevila discussing what it means to be human, a woman, and a mythological creature. I'm thinking of writing with Solana and Karin, hope that's cool with you two! :m;;; (I-i always feel like I have to ask permission. xD;;;)
Thank you so much for reading this chapter, if you did!
