((Great job introducing her! Jade seems to be a cool character!))

"It's a Hollow! Aim for the head!" Tempest shouted, and launched herself forward. With a single slash of her Zanpakuto, Tempest defeated the Hollow. It seemed that it was a normal one, but more appeared to be coming. She looked around, examining the area she was in. It was a basement. Then, she saw a girl with jet black hair sitting on the ground, holding a strange looking staff. 'Could it be a Zanpakuto?' Tempest thought.

"Hey, be more careful! When another one comes, aim for the middle of its head. You can defeat them that way." Tempest ordered. And, as if on cue, another Hollow charged into the basement, making its way towards Jade. "Stop right there!" Tempest shouted, and used her Keito. She held her hand out and aimed it at the Hollow, palm up. A blast of lightning zapped the Hollow, weakening it, but only slightly.

"Persistent thing." Tempest grumbled. Suddenly another one came out, but it looked different. It's body was red and looked like it was made of fire. It opened its mouth and shot a river of fire at Tempest. "Look out!" Jade yelled. Tempest stayed calm and deflected it with a wall of ice, so that the rest of the building didn't get damaged. Dust kicked up and made it harder to see.

"Hughn-" Tempest grunted as she jumped up again, but was pinned to the ground. The fiery Hollow grinned a wide, toothy grin. It then lifted a finger, which turned into a giant white blade, and struck it in Tempest's side.

"AGGHHH!" She screamed in pain. 'What is this creature... is it the ones that we discovered? I don't think I can handle it alone!' She thought. "You look delicious, Soul Reaper. Absolutely scrumptious! Don't worry, I'll devour your soul in seconds to reduce the pain!" The Hollow said as it reared back to deliver another attack.