I know I kinda sorta ask this a lot... but I'm kinda sorta getting stuck in a rut with my BIG ASS one-shot. Is anybody willing to take a peak at it? I just... need to know if the web I'm weaving is a bit too messy. -sigh- I really need to find people willing to do this type of stuff for me.

But if you're willing to read a 40+ page not finished fanfic revolving mostly around Roxas drop a comment. I'd really appreciate it. So far the romance is like... nonexistent, so don't even worry about that type of stuff. I won't ask for an e-mail or anything... I'll just start dropping bits and pieces of it into a world for you to read.