Waiting for the TR patch to come up, wanna see the new character and clothes. So while I wait and read fanfics I'm gonna make a list of stuff I really like about the fic I'm working on. Beware of spoiler, but I doubt any of you guys wanna read it anyhoo.
- Riku has finally been dethroned. No longer is he the king of the douchebags.
- FIRST LEMON SCENE! Oh, so full of the lulz.
- Chaing smoking Axel. He's just too much fun.
- Roxas' mooning over Axel. Seeing as we're still in the puppy love part, Roxas keeps going on and on about how freakin' pretty/scared Axel is. Oh his white teeth, oh his hair, oh scaaaaaaars
- Demyx gets offed, cause... He's Demyx
- The symbolism...there's a lot
- The weather and always cold Roxas, except for when he's with Axel... awww (still puppy love)
- I GOT TO USE AN INTERVENTION JOKE!
- Sora being older than Roxas...BY FOUR YEARS. I don't think I've ever seen that before... but it makes sense.
- City life. 'Worth It' takes place mostly in Chicago and Providence, but this feels more urban over all.
- A cut back in swearing... so much so Roxas gets offended when Axel drops the F bomb.
- Limited dialogue, and when they speak it sounds good and is important.
- Guuuuuuuuuuuuns
- High school aged, but totally not a high school fic. There's about... three paragraphs of Roxas actually in school. During that time he's like "Dur pretty red head across the street"
- Kairi staring not as a bitch/let's-hook-up-the-gays girl. Nope she knits and is a college student. She's cool and will have a bigger part soon.
- Namine as the bitch. I DIDN'T MEAN FOR IT TO HAPPEN
- Sir's Not normally appearing in this fanfiction will appear... and promptly get killed. SORRY VEXEN, YOU'RE NEXT!
- I'M GOING TO FINISH IT!
- Dead parents... I'm fond of them. I wonder what that says about me?
- Plot, it's so pretty.
- EVERY CHAPTER ENDING WITH A "Dude...Axel's going to ruin your life/kill your brother/IS BAD" MOMENT BUT ROXAS NEVER LISTENS!
- Chapters are a decent length long, about 7 pages. Tis nice.
All I can think of...