So what?

So should i start posting for my writing world alredy?
seems too early jeeze guys, not so enthusiastic are we?

anyways heres something i wrote

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I stand and watch
as you hoot and laugh

your twistedness becomes a malady in my stomach
churning the acid and causing pain

the same pain as i see before me
inflicts me just as bad

the words edging out of my mouth
gasping for air as i fall to the groud

stop it...stop it....

End